But with a Whimper
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Mr. E. Monkey » Wed Oct 27, 2010 2:14 pm
Ponyboy314 wrote:This was a stand alone.
And it stands damn well on its own merit. Absolutely fantastic read. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Re: But with a Whimper
by SPQR » Wed Oct 27, 2010 2:24 pm
Another group of satisfied customers, Ponyboy, including me.
Why are you not published in real print?
I'm thinking Permuted Press would pick you up like that (snaps fingers).
I think we all agree that we've all read FAR worse stuff than ponyboy is cranking out here in our little playroom, stuff that the big houses in New York are paying money for.
Why are you not published in real print?
I'm thinking Permuted Press would pick you up like that (snaps fingers).
I think we all agree that we've all read FAR worse stuff than ponyboy is cranking out here in our little playroom, stuff that the big houses in New York are paying money for.
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Re: But with a Whimper
by SteveD » Wed Oct 27, 2010 2:35 pm
Just wanting to add my thanks for another great story PB!!!!!!!
if all else fails, accelerate!
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Scott in AK » Wed Oct 27, 2010 2:52 pm
Ponyboy, Fantastic story, it had me on the edge of my seat many times. Great job!!!
He who tries to tread on me
will find himself in misery
and this I promise faithfully
upon my fathers name
will find himself in misery
and this I promise faithfully
upon my fathers name
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Braxton » Wed Oct 27, 2010 3:23 pm
PB. This was the best so far. Now top it!!!
There he goes. One of God's own prototypes. A high-powered mutant of some kind never even considered for mass production. Too weird to live, and too rare to die.
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Re: But with a Whimper
by ForgeCorvus » Wed Oct 27, 2010 3:43 pm
Ponyboy, take some time off you've earned it with this great story (I'm always sad to come to the end of them)
OK, thats about enough time
MOAR
OK, thats about enough time
MOAR
I'm English, our Government doesn't trust us to have real guns........or decent pocket knives for that matter
Good job theres no such thing as a Trebuchet licence
Winner, PMBoB
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Good job theres no such thing as a Trebuchet licence
Winner, PMBoB
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Hammer31 » Wed Oct 27, 2010 4:00 pm
Incredible. I have said it before and will say it again, you need to write for a living. Wonderful story.
One of the eighty.
Of every one-hundred men,
Ten shouldn't even be there.
Eighty are nothing but targets.
Nine are real fighters....
We are lucky to have them,
They make the battle. Ah, but one,
One of them is a Warrior....
He will bring the others home.
Hericletus 500BC
Of every one-hundred men,
Ten shouldn't even be there.
Eighty are nothing but targets.
Nine are real fighters....
We are lucky to have them,
They make the battle. Ah, but one,
One of them is a Warrior....
He will bring the others home.
Hericletus 500BC
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Brock Meatstone » Wed Oct 27, 2010 4:13 pm
So.... whatever happened to Brian?
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Wrecking Ball » Wed Oct 27, 2010 6:04 pm
I honestly get "tingly" inside while reading your stories; they bring me so much joy.
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Re: But with a Whimper
by mace » Wed Oct 27, 2010 7:59 pm
This was a story I just had to check every day great story 
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Dawgboy » Wed Oct 27, 2010 9:55 pm
Thank you for that Ponyboy. Many entertaining hours in there.
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Mr. E. Monkey » Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:54 pm
Brock Meatstone wrote:So.... whatever happened to Brian?
After being clubbed and cuffed, possibly defecated on, I dunno. They probably could've found a few charges to press against the guy.
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Snapshot7.62 » Wed Oct 27, 2010 11:25 pm
Great story as always Ponyboy!
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Re: But with a Whimper
by kolga » Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:28 am
Fantastic story, as usual. I second (third?) the idea of an anthology of your stories.
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Re: But with a Whimper
by thebigstick » Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:17 am
bad ass story (slow clap) thank you very much for taking the time to write this awesome piece of fiction for us. -TBS
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Re: But with a Whimper
by dwr cymru » Thu Oct 28, 2010 1:27 pm
Brilliant as a stand alone thanks PB
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Re: But with a Whimper
by purplemountain » Thu Oct 28, 2010 3:25 pm
Good stuff!! Please start another one soon 
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Re: But with a Whimper
by biggcarl » Fri Oct 29, 2010 12:24 pm
Damn. Now what am I going to do at work.
Jeriah wrote:
What is a good way to stash a small item for later retrieval, for those who are squamish about using their prison wallet?
What is a good way to stash a small item for later retrieval, for those who are squamish about using their prison wallet?
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Hoppy » Fri Oct 29, 2010 9:45 pm
very nice. very nice indeed.
No one has a sense for the dramatic.
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Re: But with a Whimper
by WhoShotJR » Fri Oct 29, 2010 10:56 pm
PB, my days are very 
without you. Hope you have another up your sleeve.
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Re: But with a Whimper
by curt48mauser » Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:31 pm
So, did our federalies keep any of these things for "examination"? I could see this having another life of its' own on down the road when some yahoos decide to liberate a lab.
Fantastic read Ponyboy! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Fantastic read Ponyboy! Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Hudsonhawk777 » Mon Nov 08, 2010 4:59 pm
PB,
Thanks again sir for sharing you talent with us. Well done sir. Well done.
Oh and WOLVERINES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks again sir for sharing you talent with us. Well done sir. Well done.
Oh and WOLVERINES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Following the path of least resistance is what makes rivers and men crooked.--Unknown
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Re: But with a Whimper
by Bun-G » Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:23 am
Hoppy wrote:
very nice. very nice indeed.
Brilliant story you never disappoint
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