But with a Whimper

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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby PhoenixCadet » Wed Oct 27, 2010 1:10 pm

Amazing story!! Simply amazing!
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Mr. E. Monkey » Wed Oct 27, 2010 2:14 pm

Ponyboy314 wrote:This was a stand alone.


And it stands damn well on its own merit. Absolutely fantastic read. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby SPQR » Wed Oct 27, 2010 2:24 pm

Another group of satisfied customers, Ponyboy, including me.
Why are you not published in real print?
I'm thinking Permuted Press would pick you up like that (snaps fingers).

I think we all agree that we've all read FAR worse stuff than ponyboy is cranking out here in our little playroom, stuff that the big houses in New York are paying money for.
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby SteveD » Wed Oct 27, 2010 2:35 pm

Just wanting to add my thanks for another great story PB!!!!!!!
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Scott in AK » Wed Oct 27, 2010 2:52 pm

Ponyboy, Fantastic story, it had me on the edge of my seat many times. Great job!!!
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Braxton » Wed Oct 27, 2010 3:23 pm

PB. This was the best so far. Now top it!!!
There he goes. One of God's own prototypes. A high-powered mutant of some kind never even considered for mass production. Too weird to live, and too rare to die.

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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby ForgeCorvus » Wed Oct 27, 2010 3:43 pm

Ponyboy, take some time off you've earned it with this great story (I'm always sad to come to the end of them)













OK, thats about enough time
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Hammer31 » Wed Oct 27, 2010 4:00 pm

Incredible. I have said it before and will say it again, you need to write for a living. Wonderful story.
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Ten shouldn't even be there.
Eighty are nothing but targets.
Nine are real fighters....
We are lucky to have them,
They make the battle. Ah, but one,
One of them is a Warrior....
He will bring the others home.

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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Brock Meatstone » Wed Oct 27, 2010 4:13 pm

So.... whatever happened to Brian?
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Wrecking Ball » Wed Oct 27, 2010 6:04 pm

I honestly get "tingly" inside while reading your stories; they bring me so much joy.
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby mace » Wed Oct 27, 2010 7:59 pm

This was a story I just had to check every day great story :)
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Dawgboy » Wed Oct 27, 2010 9:55 pm

Thank you for that Ponyboy. Many entertaining hours in there.
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Mr. E. Monkey » Wed Oct 27, 2010 10:54 pm

Brock Meatstone wrote:So.... whatever happened to Brian?


After being clubbed and cuffed, possibly defecated on, I dunno. They probably could've found a few charges to press against the guy.
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Snapshot7.62 » Wed Oct 27, 2010 11:25 pm

Great story as always Ponyboy!
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby kolga » Thu Oct 28, 2010 12:28 am

Fantastic story, as usual. I second (third?) the idea of an anthology of your stories.
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby thebigstick » Thu Oct 28, 2010 4:17 am

bad ass story (slow clap) thank you very much for taking the time to write this awesome piece of fiction for us. -TBS
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby dwr cymru » Thu Oct 28, 2010 1:27 pm

Brilliant as a stand alone thanks PB
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby purplemountain » Thu Oct 28, 2010 3:25 pm

Good stuff!! Please start another one soon :wink:
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby biggcarl » Fri Oct 29, 2010 12:24 pm

Damn. Now what am I going to do at work.
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Hoppy » Fri Oct 29, 2010 9:45 pm

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very nice. very nice indeed.
No one has a sense for the dramatic.
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby WhoShotJR » Fri Oct 29, 2010 10:56 pm

PB, my days are very :cry: without you. Hope you have another up your sleeve. :D
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby curt48mauser » Sat Oct 30, 2010 7:31 pm

So, did our federalies keep any of these things for "examination"? I could see this having another life of its' own on down the road when some yahoos decide to liberate a lab.
Fantastic read Ponyboy! Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Hudsonhawk777 » Mon Nov 08, 2010 4:59 pm

PB,

Thanks again sir for sharing you talent with us. Well done sir. Well done.







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Re: But with a Whimper

Postby Bun-G » Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:23 am

Hoppy wrote:Image

very nice. very nice indeed.



Brilliant story you never disappoint
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