High Ground: House of Adair

Post by **Zimmy** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 7:04 pm

You have a very interesting writing style and I'm looking forward to the next edition

Post by **dogbane** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 12:42 am

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Post by **KYZHunters** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 2:31 am

Nailed it. Can't wait for more.

Post by **maldon007** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 6:59 am

Ooooo yeah!

Nice add, really liked how I learned the background & didn't really feel like you were giving me background

I went to sleep last night after checking this thread, no MOAR was here, then I wake up & there's MOAR! I am now properly motivated to finish the chapter I've been writing for a week

Post by **dogbane** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 8:33 am

Thanks, folks. I also decided not to fill in too much, just in case I wanted to write a prequel. I wanted james to tell the story in a slightly haphazard way, jumping forward and back in time as different events came to mind. I wanted the conversation to drive his narrative and not the other way around.

Next we'll hear Cindy's acount and then we'll jump over to join Rob in the next chapter.

Post by **Sheriff McClelland** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 9:22 am

It's a good ride . Thanks !

Post by **Tetra Grammaton Cleric** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 9:26 am

Sheriff McClelland wrote:It's a good ride . Thanks !

Roger that. good job DB.

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Post by **wee drop o' bush** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 9:54 am

Good stuff DB

Keep 'er lit!

Post by **FlashDaddy** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 10:45 am

Excellent installment, I could taste the soup and stir fry. Looking forward to MOAR!

Post by **dogbane** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 1:00 pm

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Post by **Towanda** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 1:21 pm

Lovely work, Dogbane. I'm eager for more.

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Post by **Sheriff McClelland** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 1:24 pm

If it's permitted to ask . What is a Pinkerton revolver (.22) ?
Thanks

Post by **dogbane** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 1:40 pm

Sheriff McClelland wrote:If it's permitted to ask . What is a Pinkerton revolver (.22) ?
Thanks

It's meant to denote a detective revolver designed for a Pinkerton agent. Iver Johnson made some, and I think some other manufacturers. I knew a guy whose dad was a Pinkerton agent and he had his dad's 9-shot .22 lr revolver. Sirhan Sirhan killed Bobby Kennedy with a similar model.

Post by **Sheriff McClelland** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 1:46 pm

Very good , thank you . I had a picture in my head of an H&R or IJ .

Post by **wee drop o' bush** » Sat Aug 18, 2012 1:52 pm

Dangnamit MOAR MOAR MOAR!

Very nicely written Dogbane.

Post by **dogbane** » Sun Aug 19, 2012 4:11 pm

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Post by **wee drop o' bush** » Sun Aug 19, 2012 5:54 pm

I'd like to know more about the plagues origin?

Post by **dogbane** » Sun Aug 19, 2012 5:55 pm

wee drop o' bush wrote:
I'd like to know more about the plagues origin?

You'll have to wait for Book Three for that.

Post by **wee drop o' bush** » Sun Aug 19, 2012 5:56 pm

Bastige

Post by **dogbane** » Sun Aug 19, 2012 8:57 pm

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Post by **dogbane** » Mon Aug 20, 2012 12:18 am

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Post by **wee drop o' bush** » Mon Aug 20, 2012 3:28 am

Excellent. I'm looking forward to when it's finished so I can read it all in one humongous gorge

Post by **FlashDaddy** » Mon Aug 20, 2012 5:31 am

Awesome writing! Thanks!

Post by **dogbane** » Mon Aug 20, 2012 8:10 am

How do readers feel about Rob and his story so far?

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